Many museums charge for admission, while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Fees are being taken by the numerous
museum
and others are free.
This
essay would argue that despite some demerits of less visitors due to its charges, the benefits of being well maintained
museum
and a huge amount of collections far outweighs any drawbacks.
a
Suggestion
A
number of people may not prefer to visit the chargeable
museum
.
Firstly
, they find it boring and do not want to spend money on it as they want to grab a knowledge at free of cost.
Secondly
, some people cannot pay entry fees of the
museum
due to their poverty.Ultimately,
museum
Suggestion
the museum
a museum
museums
may suffer and disappear because of the given reasons.
For example
, the government of India revealed that 40% of
museum
which are not taking any fees from the visitors, are diminishing a
socio economic
involving social as well as economic factors
socioeconomic
level and visited by everyone.
However
,
museum
who
are taking
Suggestion
is taking
fees, attracts more visitors due to their standard maintenance. The principle advantage of the payable
museum
is, by getting money from the people, it can be refurbished at the proper time,
therefore
, able to contain an astonished antique and a books of the respective subjects, which attracts more visitors.Without a specific amount of charges, it may not possible to make changes frequently and include reliable things.
For instance
, Mahatma Gandhi
Museum
in Ahmedabad revealed data that,
instead
of taking high amount of fees, they got a lot of visitors, because of, advanced changes
such
as 3D audio-visual effects to show the whole life of Gandhiji.
Hence
, due to an unique features people would definitely spend their money to see
museum
Suggestion
the museum
a museum
. In conclusion,
although
, chargeable
museum
may not provide benefits to everyone, the facilities and an information are being provided by
this
museum
far outweigh the drawbacks of it.
Submitted by vishwa sagar on

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