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Some people encourage yong children to leave their parent's house as soon as they become agults while other say children should stay at their parents house as long as possible. Discuss both views with opinion

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Some people say that leaving their parent's house before youngster is important to become mature.
On the other hand
, some people explicitly
oposide
set forth authoritatively as obligatory
imposed
opposite
episode
 on
this
. I will discuss both view and with my opinion at the end. To embark upon, ago the adults leaving their parent's house is tough decision for any children.
However
, for
become
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becoming
 successful in their
life
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life, then
then
this
 is a good idea. If any child
leave
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leaves
 their parent's house and take care
own
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own, then
then
 they can understand that how to solve any problems in
difficult time
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difficult times
a difficult time
,
moreover
 they
also known
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are also known
also knew
 that how to mange money and saving. If they want to reach their
goals
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goals, then
then
 stay along is
better option
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a better option
 for every
children
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child
, some people say.
On the other hand
, some people agree
with
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to
 stay their parents
untill
up to, before the time
until
 they not become adults. Some people say that children isn't mature to solve their every
problems
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problem
.
For instance
, parents feel that how their child would be manage food and study pressure and they can't take care
by
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of
 himself,
moreover
 food
of
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on
from
 the outside
also
 can be
poisonable
(of persons) pleasant in appearance and personality
personable
. In my opinion, children should be stay alone, because before the youngest is only option to become mature,
furthermore
 parents can't stay with us for entire life. In conclusion, when leave their parents is a crucial time for children,
hence
 parents should be
encourage
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encouraged
 to stay alone.
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