Some think that governments should support retired people financially while others believe they should take care of themselves.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that care

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older people requires a huge amount money and

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there are some people consider it is the responsibility of a

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to support them, others believe that the population need to look after themselves. In my opinion, some would be supported,

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, distributing the allowance could be based on the

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status of the elderly. On the one side of

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the argument

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, advocates of the old age pension point that the senior people contributed to the nation's economy, during their productive age.

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means from their earnings, a portion has contributed to the growth of the society in the form of tax.

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, they have worked for the developments of the

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, both financially and morally. Alternatively, if they did not work selflessly, probably the

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would not be attained the current status.

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, in return, generally, older population deserves financial assistance from their government. On the other side, opponents of

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view, think that the senior people need to be helped by themselves or family members. Since they looked after their children and other family, when they were youth, family must take in charge of the care of these ones.

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, every person can save or secure a certain amount of money for their old age period. As the government has many other vital issues to resolve it, paying

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the allowance

can be an extra burden in a long run.

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, eventually, results in

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's under developments. I, personally, view that people from the poor

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background would be taken care of the authority.

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, they may be abandoned in their own society, that may not be suitable for any progressive nation.

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, there are some study found that helping older people would create a positive outlook about the

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's social security system. In conclusion, even though people have various

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regarding to provide some financial support. I, think, they can be financed based on their living standard.