You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think the money spent in developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extend do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.
It is often a debatable topic, whether the spending of money is happening for the right things? Some people often think about the more effective ways when it comes to money rather than utilising all the funds for
space
development. Use synonyms
Therefore
, I agree with the mentioned statement which emphasis on funds to be used on other essential sectors. Still, at the same time, I believe investing money Linking Words
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in
space
development is equally imperative.
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, in my viewpoint, there are myriad sectors/areas where capital investment is needed. A country like India, where the majority of people are struggling to feed their families out of hunger, Linking Words
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, 75- 80 per cent of people in India are depended on Agriculture, where every year due to some of the other reasons Linking Words
such
as Drought in Maharashtra, Floods due to heavy rainfall in Assam, citizens lives get impacted, so in order to make their life better Linking Words
government
should invest their funds on Use synonyms
such
crisis. Linking Words
Furthermore
, gaining a basic education and medical facilities is still a big question for the Linking Words
government
. Use synonyms
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, a report has been published by the RTE & RCI, which stated that 50 % of children are still not to attend the schools, every Linking Words
year more
than 60 per cent people died due to not having proper medical facilities. The Accept comma addition
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government
needs to look after all Use synonyms
such
grass root problems by utilising funds on all these areas for the benefit of the people.
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However
, the capital investment in science or Linking Words
space
technology will always be fruitful for the country because as the population is ever-growing and sooner or later we will face an energy crisis, so it is important for the Use synonyms
government
to find the solutions through Use synonyms
space
advancement, Use synonyms
For example
, India and the USA are the only two countries who had landed on the Mars and found water availability on the planet. By Linking Words
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act of achievement, India got huge recognition across the world and many countries have approached ISRO to launch the satellite for them, which is indeed very cost-effective, through Linking Words
this
way India is now manufacturing satellites for almost all the countries, which promote better flow of foreign exchange. Advancing in Linking Words
space
will Use synonyms
also
help to find many useful minerals, which are non- renewable in nature and can be useful in future.
To conclude, the capital spent in developing the technology for Linking Words
space
exploration is justified, Use synonyms
however
, it is the responsibility of the Linking Words
government
of any country to look after the grass-root problems keenly and importance should be given equally on both the sectors.Use synonyms
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Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.