Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well others say that teachers only teach students academic subjects discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Few people believed that teachers are responsible for the student's educational growth only, whereas others believe that they
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help individuals to decide what is correct or not in their life.
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essay will enumerate the views from both the sides. Nowadays, if any child is doing any wrong thing and if his instructor punishes him or guide him that he is doing something wrong,
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punishment or guidance is not accepted by any of their parents.
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, these parents do the complaint of that professor saying to
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the adviser
an adviser
, "you are only responsible for the subject teaching".
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, they
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want action to be taken against the lecturer why he is guiding anything,
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of, he can concentrate on his subjective teaching only. These kind of children gets so pampered that they unable to learn anything about the life and they even cannot make any
judgment
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for themselves.
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, parents who support their wards lecturer to teach them as per one's understanding. The growth of these kind of kids is very good. These kids are more mature, always learn from their mistakes and have right
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making abilities.
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, if
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the trainer
a trainer
has given the power
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they will always able to guide students in the correct direction and in return the student get the full benefit of
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coaching. To conclude, the children are more successful and have great
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making power who not even learned subjective as well as soft skills from the teachers.
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will always help one to make the right
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at the right time.
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