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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#computers #languages #waste #time
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Today's generation has significantly influenced by electronic device
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 as Computers and Mobile phones. These devices are effectively working for
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 translation at any corner of the world.
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, I disagree with to get educated the overseas languages is a waste of precious time. In following paragraphs I will discuss the how computers are delightfully helpful to translate languages and what's important to be learn foreign languages. To start up with
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the computer language translation program
a computer language translation program
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 translation program. The
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 has functioned by various kinds of programmes, which can make an easier job work for users.
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, International business is prominent in the present generation. Entrepreneurs have made their deal by email or fax, usually, they reply in their national
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, but
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the computer
a computer
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 can translate that whole document or procedures in any
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 without any fraction of the original meaning of words in that
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. In my point of view, to learn any
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 is absolutely huge beneficial for everyone
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 who like to travel around the world as a visitor or business purpose.
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, basic level of reading and fluency is most required while travel by public transportation in a foreign country.
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, Canada revenue agency had a survey of Qubec state, where the
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 is French than English.
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, the report says, only 30% immigrants could speak and read moderate level of French
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language whether
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language, whether
, it has mandated to survive in that province. What's More, Multiple
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 knowledge would be a golden opportunity for
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who wants to work with a political leader as a translator. To sum up, I would say everyone should learn basic command of foreign
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 which it would be useful for their educational or entrepreneur life.
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,
computer
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 device can help for translation, but it can't use while the person having face to face meeting with foreign
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
  • Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
  • Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
  • Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
  • Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
  • Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
  • Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities
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