Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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people assume that it is very easy to identify about person ethnic by looking at his attire,
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open to doubt or debate
debatable
issue in many developing
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countries, for
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, in
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
many people can be recognized by
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of them or themselves
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to partly agree
partly agree
about the culture could be known by
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appearance, but
appearance but
appearances but
not his character,
ill
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discuss more in the following paragraphs. Muslim in middle east countries wears clothes that resemble their religion and belief.
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, it is very easy to calculate their background which religion they belong to but to find out the
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person's
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character style
how is he in terms of dealing with others it is not accurate to
anylyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
by his wearing.
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inda
known for his rich history and fashion, every part of
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
has its own tradition
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attire
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food
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and worships, we get
know
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to know
their personality only when we get to sit and talk to them. Public around the world, mostly judge people by the way they look, in developed countries like Canada
,
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USA
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UK, they wear similar clothes they look admirable,
howeverhowever
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however however
to know where he belongs, to what he likes the food he likes cannot be judged by his appearance rather talk to them about their likes dislikes.
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For
example, in developed countries most students migrate to study abroad they find it very difficult to mend in
new culture
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a new culture
the new culture
, it is very obvious to them fumbling while talking to foreigners they get stuck, it turns to homesick.
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tend
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tends
to
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that it can easily get to know persons again, but to find out his character cannot be decided based on his appearance,
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
tend to disagree about the fact to know his/her spirit will be based on his wear.
clothes
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Clothes
only resemble their culture or belief, not the one how he is.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • garments
  • traditional attire
  • sartorial choices
  • expressive style
  • cultural identity
  • psychological implications
  • non-verbal cues
  • globalization
  • perceptions
  • professional demeanor
  • societal norms
  • economic constraints
  • subcultures
  • fashion movements
  • individualism
  • stereotype
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