Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
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people assume that it is very easy to identify about person ethnic by looking at his attire, Suggestion
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to partly agree
partly agree
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discuss more in the following paragraphs.
Muslim in middle east countries wears clothes that resemble their religion and belief. Suggestion
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, it is very easy to calculate their background which religion they belong to but to find out the Suggestion
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persons
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person's
characterstyle
how is he in terms of dealing with others it is not accurate to Suggestion
character style
anylyze
by his wearing. consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
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known for his rich history and fashion, every part of Suggestion
india
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know
their personality only when we get to sit and talk to them.
Public around the world, mostly judge people by the way they look, in developed countries like CanadaSuggestion
to know
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to know where he belongs, to what he likes the food he likes cannot be judged by his appearance rather talk to them about their likes dislikes. Suggestion
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example, in developed countries most students migrate to study abroad they find it very difficult to mend in Suggestion
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new culture
, it is very obvious to them fumbling while talking to foreigners they get stuck, it turns to homesick.
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a new culture
the new culture
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tends
beleive
that it can easily get to know persons again, but to find out his character cannot be decided based on his appearance, accept as true; take to be true
believe
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tend to disagree about the fact to know his/her spirit will be based on his wear. refers to the speaker or writer
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only resemble their culture or belief, not the one how he is.Suggestion
Clothes
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