These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?

A number of people move to the foreign countries along with their family members to do a job over there.Despite the main disadvantage of
high amount
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the high amount
of expenses to stay with the whole family, I believe the major advantage of moral
support
from the family to deal with new work ambience is far
outweigh
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outweighed
than any downside. The significant disadvantage of living with a family in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
country
, is a
person
would face financial burden.
First
of all, he cannot stay in a sharing home, which is economical due to his rest of the family's comfort.
Hence
, to give a huge amount of rent in the starting period
at
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in
of
the new
country
to a single house will become difficult.
Secondly
, Childrens' higher educational fees would
also
cause money related crisis.Because of all these reasons, in
initial days
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the initial days
, people cannot tackle the financial burden at a new place with a new employment.
For example
, The New York Times newspaper revealed that 15% of employees who migrated with their families, were
failed
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failing
to manage their expenditure.
Although
, I believe with the help of family a
person
could overcome all the situation.
However
, the principle benefit of taking family together is a
support
from
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for
them.If people with their family live anywhere, they all will defeat any tough situation.To cope up with new working environment
support
from a wife or a parent is essential for encouragement.An employee does not feel a homesickness and a depression because his family is there to look after him.If the rest of the family
member
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members
start to work
at
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in
a new
country
such
as any part time job, they do not get money related pressure.I think
support
and help of family solve any tension of the working
person
. In conclusion, while having problem in managing an
expenses
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expense
, when a family stays with an employee in another
country
is a major drawback, I
therefore
believe a
person
can overcome with job and financial related issues by living with a family, is a main benefit far outweigh any disadvantage.
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