Less and less parents these days are smacking their children.Some people think that this is leading to a generation of misbehaved children.Do you agree of disagree with this view?

Nowadays, not many parents believe in spanking children and feel that
this
sort of
punishment
might end up with the generation of children who act inappropriately.
Nonetheless
, In my opinion, mild form of physical
punishment
is not harmful.Two reasons for which I feel that way, I will explain them in the following essay.
Firstly
, by light physical
punishment
, parents can make children live a disciplined
life
.
For instance
, if a child is being stubborn on his or her inappropriate demand or a child is at fault and still insists on fighting with other children,
then
smacking can make children realize their mistake, apologize and to make sure not to repeat those mistakes again in future.
Hence
, parents can make children learn some inevitable moral values of
life
.For
this
reason light smacking is appropriate.
Secondly
, it even helps children to concentrate on studies and to be more sincere towards studies.To illustrate, it is well known fact that children's tendency towards education is very inattentive despite being the
education
Suggestion
educational
base of their
life
.In
this
case, mild spanking can make children or even adult to do their homework regularly, to study properly, which id beneficial to themselves at the end.So, lenient beating is acceptable. To sum up, faint physical
punishment
is actually a blessing in disguise for children.Due to it helps them to learn morals of
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as discipline and forces them to be attentive to studies.
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