People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society How can we create an ideal society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Desire to live in a perfect community or
society
without any problems, many people failed to attempt to create an ideal
society
. In my opinion, an ideal
society
is, where there is equality among the genders, safety of all human begins.
This
essay will give the most viable solution, with regard to how people can create a unique
society
for living.
Firstly
, in my viewpoint, an ideal
society
should be given importance to gender equality irrespective
to
Suggestion
of
caste, age, colour,
for example
, recently in New Zealand, the prime minister has passed the bill of equal pay irrespective of their gender I.E, the job opportunities will be given as per performance in the interview and increment will be done as per performance, efforts, and dedication. In India, promotion, payment of salary is often done on the basis of gender and many of the times males are preferred to lead teams
instead
of females.
Furthermore
, safety is a major concern for females in India, except in metro cities like Mumbai, Bangalore safety is still a concern,
for instance
, a metro city like Delhi, where crime rates are at par with other cities and women are not safe, in case they want to travel after 7 pm for work or any leisure activity, so for an ideal
society
, these two major concerns need to be taken into consideration
first
by the government so that everyone gets an equal opportunity to work, and have the liberty to roam wherever they want. A potential solution for the people to create a good and liveable
society
is that rules should be followed by the common people,
for instance
, very a few cities are there in India
such
as Sikkim, Assam, and Ladakh, where people can find discipline among citizens and respecting public properties without damaging any historical monuments or statues.
Secondly
, an ideal
society
demands for cleanliness, stop inhuman behaviour towards animals and preservation of the environment. There are many ways, where citizens can contribute by creating
positive
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a positive society
society
, initiatives,
such
as, planting trees near to their home, stop others to vandalising public properties, taking support from PETA  to help homeless animals or by volunteering for a good cause like efforts to stop water or air pollution. All these efforts can be taken to create an ideal
society
for the people and future generations. To conclude, to create the positive community or ideal
society
, which can be developed by small initiatives by the locals;
however
, all these efforts should be done willingly and should be constant for the betterment of the
society
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ideal society
  • equality
  • social justice
  • sustainable practices
  • community engagement
  • economic stability
  • cultural diversity
  • accessible healthcare
  • fair justice system
  • educational opportunities
  • environmental sustainability
  • active participation
  • inclusive society
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