Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student's attitude is more important to succeed in education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Whether
successful academic attainment is more dependent on having
sound
teachers or on the
student
's
attitude
, is the subject of much debate. While some say educational success hinges primarily on the
teacher
, others say the learner's character is more important.
This
essay will consider both sides of the divide and
then
show that having good instructors contributes more towards a
good
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better
education
than the
student
's
attitude
. On the one hand, those who opine that the availability of good teachers speak more to academic excellence than
student
's
attitude
say that
knowledge
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the knowledge
imparted from teachers to pupils
can not
can not
cannot
rise above the intrinsic and academic ability of the
teacher
in the
first
place. They say if the
teacher
is good and academically
sound
, the chances of raising good students and contributing to educational success as a whole increases.
For example
, they cite South Korea as a case study where, in 1995, the government decided to be more deliberate about the training and recruitment of teachers. The decision came in the light of years of academic woes despite nationwide campaign for and evidence to show proof of
good
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the good student attitude
student
attitude
towards learning.
As a result
of
this
massive investment
into
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in
teachers training and recruitment of competent academic instructors, the country's ministry of
education
recorded, within ten years of the commencement of the program,
50 percent increase
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a 50 percent increase
in its educational attainment compared to what it had in over 30 years of its existence.
This
shows that
sound
and we'll
trained
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train
teachers contribute more to
good
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a better education
better education
education
than
students
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students'
student's
attitude
does.
On the other hand
, those who say the
student
's behaviour towards
education
matters more than how
sound
the
teacher
is say
attitude
determines how receptive the learner will be. If the
student
is not properly motivated and enthusiastic about academics, the attempts by the
teacher
to impart knowledge will be fruitless. To illustrate, they mention the case of Northern
Nigeria where
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Nigeria, where
a large proportion of young people enrolled in schools have
poor
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a poor attitude
attitude
towards school.
This
is despite the presence of young, vibrant, and academically
sound
teaching graduates who are posted
to
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in
these areas to teach.
As a result
of the frivolous regard with which
education
is held in these areas, they have the lowest turnout of educated individuals in the country, and in fact, in West Africa.
This
example shows that the
student
's
enthusiastic
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enthusiasm
and welcoming views about
education
trumps having excellent teachers in the race towards academic excellence. In conclusion, it is believed that both the presence of academically sagacious individuals who are teachers and a willing mind to learn from the students are equally important in achieving good
education
. Successful
education
becomes elusive when one is present and the other is not.
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