Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student's attitude is more important to succeed in education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Whether

successful academic attainment is more dependent on having

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teachers or on the

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's

attitude

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, is the subject of much debate. While some say educational success hinges primarily on the

teacher

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, others say the learner's character is more important.

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essay will consider both sides of the divide and

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show that having good instructors contributes more towards a

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better

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than the

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's

attitude

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. On the one hand, those who opine that the availability of good teachers speak more to academic excellence than

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's

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say that

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the knowledge

imparted from teachers to pupils

can not

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rise above the intrinsic and academic ability of the

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in the

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place. They say if the

teacher

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is good and academically

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, the chances of raising good students and contributing to educational success as a whole increases.

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, they cite South Korea as a case study where, in 1995, the government decided to be more deliberate about the training and recruitment of teachers. The decision came in the light of years of academic woes despite nationwide campaign for and evidence to show proof of

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the good student attitude

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attitude

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towards learning.

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of

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massive investment

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in

teachers training and recruitment of competent academic instructors, the country's ministry of

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recorded, within ten years of the commencement of the program,

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a 50 percent increase

in its educational attainment compared to what it had in over 30 years of its existence.

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shows that

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and we'll

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train

teachers contribute more to

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a better education

better education

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than

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students'

student's

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does.

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, those who say the

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's behaviour towards

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matters more than how

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the

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is say

attitude

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determines how receptive the learner will be. If the

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is not properly motivated and enthusiastic about academics, the attempts by the

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to impart knowledge will be fruitless. To illustrate, they mention the case of Northern

Nigeria where

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Nigeria, where

a large proportion of young people enrolled in schools have

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a poor attitude

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towards school.

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is despite the presence of young, vibrant, and academically

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teaching graduates who are posted

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in

these areas to teach.

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of the frivolous regard with which

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is held in these areas, they have the lowest turnout of educated individuals in the country, and in fact, in West Africa.

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example shows that the

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's

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enthusiasm

and welcoming views about

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trumps having excellent teachers in the race towards academic excellence. In conclusion, it is believed that both the presence of academically sagacious individuals who are teachers and a willing mind to learn from the students are equally important in achieving good

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. Successful

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becomes elusive when one is present and the other is not.