Some people believe music a good of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is a believe that,

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is a good way to connect with people of different caste,

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and ages. Is it so? In my view

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can be a medium to interact with people of different

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Tune

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and dance are known for ages. One could justify

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statement by taking examples from history. These two form enjoyments are enjoyed by

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despite their age or

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because to enjoy one doesn't have to put effort in understanding them, it could be enjoyed by it's beats only. There are different categories

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an unknown and unpredictable phenomenon that causes an event to result one way rather than another

fortune

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like, rock, jazz, fork, pop, etc. Different people enjoy different kind of

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, one could like slow song

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, the person would go for jazz or classical

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tune whereasif

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a person his or her inclination towards loud sounds

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they would choose

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a rock tune

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or metal form

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some form of

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is enjoyed by

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despite their age or

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they belong to, that would be traditional

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or country

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. In my opinion music can be used as a medium to connect with people of different culture and ages.

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, there a very famous album of Wiz Khalifa known as waving flag,

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in the world enjoyed

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song because

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felt some kind of connection with the songs.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

219 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

cultural diversity
harmony
integration
bridging gaps
foster
ignite
embrace
communicate
celebrate
appreciate
inclusivity
universal language
emotional resonance
shared experiences
intercultural dialogue
intergenerational connections
cultural exchange
catalyst

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Some people believe music a good of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do think some people might not be happy to give using cash.

In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree?