As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

In

modern era

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the modern era

, cars play an important role in daily activities. There are an enhancing number of own cars for

comfortable life

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a comfortable life

in many nations. It is one of the inventions that makes

humans

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human

human's

life much easier, meanwhile it has

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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

own drawbacks as well.

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essay will elucidate both pros and cons of

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trend. One of the key

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reasons

is that people are living in the world where they are praised for their high living standards. So, they use luxurious cars to travel even

upto

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walkable

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distances, just to show- off. In a recent study, conducted in India shows that many

Indian

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Indians

have their own individual cars for each member in a family.Beside public

means

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means, for

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example buses

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example, buses

take

huge amount

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a huge amount

of

time

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to reach at the destination because it stops at different stoppage for passengers. In order to save

time

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, people travel by their own cars. They

donot

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do not

need to worry about the

particulars

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particular

times of public transports and freely move at any

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according to

there

of them or themselves

their

convenient

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convenience

conveniences

. On the other side, traffic congestion and air pollution increases by increase in the number of own vehicles. Most of the roads are overcrowded due to

huge number

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the huge number

a huge number

of cars running around the clock which release harmful fumes in

air

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the air

and on inhalation of

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formidable gases causes various breathing problems

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as asthma and

eyes

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eye

irritation.

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, most of the

time

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roads are blocked due to parking of cars haphazardly which causes inconvenience to the commuters. So

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problems

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problem

increases day by day as private cars increases on roads. To sum up, having a car gives someone freedom and standard of

living but

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living, but

traffic congestion and pollution are major problems faced by almost all the countries around the world.