Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

In order to decrease the consumption of food and drinks that contains high sugar level, the

government

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imposes taxes on all these products. Some have

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that it is not a good idea to oppose the consumption of things. In my point of view, put on the taxes on particular things is not the right solution. There are both sides of

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discussion that

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will discuss in the below paragraphs.

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with, there are many people who even do not know about the increased

tax

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put on the beverages. So there is no impact on them. They simply pay more and buy the things. It

only increase

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only increases

has only increased

is only increasing

the income of

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government parties

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the government parties

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never impact the sale of products. The companies are getting same profit before and after the

tax

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impose on all these things. Let us take an example of soft drink Coca Cola.

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soft drink brand has the biggest market in the country. As the people know that it is not good for health and must be banned by the

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. But

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of banned the

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the

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put

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puts

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the extra tax

tax

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on it and that does not impact anyone.

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Instead leaders

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Instead, leaders

is putting

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are putting

all in their pocket. To

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continue a certain state, condition, or activity

continue

contain

with, If

government

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want

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wants

to decrease the consumption of the

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,

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they should take strict action. It should restrict the production and sale of that particular

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. No doubt that there are some people who will stop buying the

product

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after increasing the price. But the numbers are very

less compared the

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less compared to the

people who will buy

any how

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if they want to have. So imposing more

tax

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on the

product

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is not the right solution. To conclude, imposing

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on

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product

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a product

the product

cannot limit the sale of

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product

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the product

, so the

government

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should go for another solution in order to save the life of many people.