You are working for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should: describe why you want to take the course explaining how it will be beneficial to the company tell who will be managing your work in your absence

Dear
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Robert, I am writing to seek your approval to
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in the Python-advanced training course. I come to know, about
this
training course from a local newspaper advertisement and it will be beneficial to our current project module, for which the client requested to develop utility scripts in a python programming language, to clean up temporary files, and
further
performance improvement of the application.
Furthermore
, I will be able to help other projects where python advanced programming is required. So, it will benefit both our organization and
also
our client businesses.
This
training course costs 600 CAD, and
also
requires classroom training of 1 week starting from 12 August to 16 August 2020. Jack, my team member agreed to handle all deliverables during my unavailability, and
hence
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disruptions to our project timelines or planned deliverables. Please provide your consent to
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, and to reimburse the training fee, which I will pay from my pocket, as slots are closing up quickly. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours Faithfully, Arunkumar
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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