You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Hello John, My name is Riya and I live in your apartment, 28-G, with my family.

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letter is to bring out some issues to your concern, the structure of some of the furniture is unavoidable and unbearable. Well, the dining table has cracks in its legs that make it difficult for us to eat food every time and we have to sit on sofas in the hall itself.

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creates many issues as we are a family of 5 members and we would like to sit together while eating, but it is not possible in the hall due to the space. As well as, the relaxing chair in the hall makes a lot of noise and my father have a habit to read in the morning while sitting on that chair, but due to the problem he does not enjoy reading till today. So,

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a humble request to you to change the furniture as we have provided the whole rent including the furniture cost.

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will be really appreciated. Looking forward

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your reply, Yours sincerely, Riya

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

179 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Dear
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
regarding
the condition
furniture
belongings
for instance
damaged
broken
worn-out
appliance
household items
it is unacceptable
inconvenient
inhabitable
affecting
negatively
urgent attention
replacement
repair
resolve
maintenance
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Thank you for your attention
Yours sincerely

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