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A university plans to develop a new reseatch center in your country . Some people want a center for business research .Other people want a center for research in agriculture .Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country ? Use specific reasons in your recommendation

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In my
country
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, Egypt, I think that the question about establishing a new
research
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center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 in
business
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 or in agriculture is a controversial one.
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 of all, because I think that both these centres must work together and cooperate.
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, a
business
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research
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center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 can collect
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 about what kind of cereal people prefer more and how much of it they consume every year.
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this
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information
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 can be used by an agricultural
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center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
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, which in its turn will provide the company engaged in farming with essential
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 of all, it is rather difficult to decide which
research
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center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
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 will bind more benefits to my
country
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. From the one side,
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business
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 centreprobe
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 can make very interesting and essential
research
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 for the economy of the
country
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.It can gather
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 about small
business
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 in the
country
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, about consumer's preferences and what can be done to decrease the state debt. When I was in my
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 year in the university, we (me and my classmates) make
research
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 regarding how many people use urban transportation every day and how much they spend on it monthly.It was really an amazing experience.We calculated numbers, learnt how to make conclusions and suggestions.From the other side, an agricultural
research
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center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 can be very helpful in studying the conditions.Under which the harvest of wheat or potato can be better or the quality of vegetables can be improved.The increased harvest of wheat will bring more money to the companies engaged in farming. With regard to mention above, I think that if I would have to choose what probe
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center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
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 will be more useful for my
country
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 it would be an agricultural
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center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
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.Because, nowadays I tend to think that a good harvest is more important for people of my
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 that knowing how advertising influence the people's behaviour
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