You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Mr Ben, My name is Tia and
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have moved recently with my family to the
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door, B-12, Golden Gate. I am a teacher in the KC school and my husband is a doctor.
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, we were living in America but due to some
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we have decided to get
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here in Canada. So, we are having a welcome party at our house
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Saturday night.
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and my husband do have
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of friends here. Since
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we both are music fans, we will be having
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night and dance along with amazing seafood
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. I would like to apologise
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before hand
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for the disturbance and
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hope that you understand
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, I cordially invite you and your family
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the party which will begin at 7 pm on Saturday, 25
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will be a chance to meet face-to-face and get along with each other families as we are not planning to leave any sooner. I hope you will come along with your family and again sorry in advance for the noise issue. I will be waiting for your reply. Yours
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, Tia
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