Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but it's disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Tourism

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is the best source of

revenue

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to many countries. Now a days traversing

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paramount as a source of income to some of the countries.

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essay will discuss about the more advantages than less disadvantages.

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, all the countries are developing the

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places for generating the huge

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revenue but

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revenue, but

there are some difficulties

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facing at the same time. Travellers will be coming from different places because of seeing some memorable tourist places

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other countries. Tourist agents

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provide some offers to attract the people to visit different countries.

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, a recent survey says that 25% of the

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generated by

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places.

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travellers visiting

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places

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many countries will generate huge

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, there are few disadvantages

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there when visitors are travelling to many countries as part of the

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. Recently, after the new year celebrations of China, all the Chinese people went to different tourist places, It causes the dangerous corona will be affected all the countries.

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, one of my friends came from china to visit US for seeing the status of liberty and zoo park. When he travelled from china, he already infected by corona positive after he reached

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the US and he spread his virus to all the nearest and dearest peoples around him.

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is the biggest disadvantage when the tourists visit other countries. In conclusion

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travel is the key factor as a source of income to many countries.

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essay agreed that compare to disadvantage there are more advantages when people are visiting

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places from different countries.

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Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but it's disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

Many people claim that ordering food is a better option than preparing it themselves. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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