Government should spend more money on railways rather than roads. do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,
world
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the world
is changing a lot as compared to the past and
transporation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
is the major factor behind
this
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development. Mostly people preffer roads and railways for travelling. I personally believe that train plays
major roal
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a major role
major role
major roll
major roles
than roads. In the following paragraphs, I have some strong arguments to support my view.
Moreover
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, there are numerous advantages of railways over roads. Because every country's development depends on their rain networks. With the help of it, lots of people can travel together without spending huge amount of money. It
is
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is also used
also uses
also
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use for supplying
heavy amount
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the heavy amount
a heavy amount
of goods, coals
,
Accept space
,
crud and many
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
Important things from one place to another place. As per 2012 government report, world's 60 percentage
gdp
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GDP
depends on the rail. Even though it is one of the safest
way
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ways
of the journey. Apart from
this
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it
is
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is also used
also
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use for the
milatry
of or relating to the study of the principles of warfare
military
perpose
an anticipated outcome that is intended or that guides your planned actions
purposes
.
For example
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, In some countries government
use
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uses
underground rail tunnels for movement of army and in some points it is
fastest mode
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the fastest mode
of
transfeering
transfer somebody to a different position or location of work
transferring
valuable things.
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however
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However
, road networks are
also
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most important of the nation. Without roads life is
next
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to impossible in
this
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modern era. It
connets
connect, fasten, or put together two or more pieces
connects
different cities and in some geographic location it
also
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joints countries. As per
oxford
a university town in northern Mississippi; home of William Faulkner
Oxford
university's research report, every nation's progress directly connected to the land networks. High level of road infrastructure automatically represents the each nation's development. To conclude, railways
contributes
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contribute
more than roads in today's world and
im
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I'm
I
totally agree with
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this statements
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this statement
these statements
. So if
government
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the government
gives more
prioraty
status established in order of importance or urgency
priority
to the rails
then
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it will be beneficial for the society as well as for the country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • environmental footprint
  • efficiency
  • pollution
  • cost-effectiveness
  • economic development
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • air pollution
  • initial investment
  • maintenance
  • upgrades
  • rural
  • urban
  • last-mile connectivity
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