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In the future, nobody will buy printed paper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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In the upcoming days, online reading material will be in demand compared to printed prepare or books. Online reading materials are more easily accessible than hard
copy
 materials. In
this
 essay, the writer focus on "for and against" on type of reading. On the one hand, it is agreed that, reading online is much convenient and easily accessible. Many of the times, it will not even cost a penny to download.
In addition
 to that, on an individual do not need to carry any hard books or printed bunch to read. Online reading is
also
 convenient, as someone may choose to do so, wherever wishes to.
In other words
, an individual does not need a specific place to sit and open book to read. Reading online allows to explore more materials than sticking to one book or number of books.
Although
 an individual may choose a specific topic or part of whole literature and shift to other more conveniently.
For example
, to write a journal multiple articles or book may need to be referred which cannot be bought at an instance,
thus
 online reference to play a vital role.
On the other hand
, it is disagreed that everyone in the future will want to be opting online to read than purchasing books or printed papers. For the reason reading via books or hard
copy
 will give an individual the feel of the subject and emotions about it.
Although
 reading via hand material will ease to highlight the important points and easily accessible without any required digital world sources like computers, smart phone or any gadgets.
For example
, kids especially at infant age can learn with hard
copy
 materials quickly than online screen. To conclude, even though the world is turning digital, many of the aspects of studying goes online, still hard
copy
 reading will have its own place to be chosen.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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