Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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then
not, these are in the conjunction used in comparatives
than
gray
zone and Advertising isn't of an achromatic color of any lightness intermediate between the extremes of white and black
grey
imune
to relating to the condition of immunity
immune
this
phenomena. In this
new age we are always srounded
with confined on all sides
surrounded
invotaions
, some are solutions to our the creation of something in the mind
inventions
extremly
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely
painfull
problems and others are solutions still looking for a problem. To market these two kinds causing physical or psychological pain
painful
excist
the two kinds of advertisement have an existence, be extant
exist
stratigies
.
an elaborate and systematic plan of action
strategies
For example
, in the relm
of a domain in which something is dominant
realm
cosmatics
, we were good serving an esthetic rather than a useful purpose
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to
until
experts were
coming up with Accept comma addition
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new line
of Suggestion
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products but
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products, but
then
when the new invoation
became the creation of something in the mind
invention
stegnant
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stagnant
alovera
etc. These new form
of products Suggestion
forms
needs
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need
advertisments
that encourage buyers into buying these products. That in reality are not too different from their a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
contemprary
products.
characteristic of the present
contemporary
contemporaries
However
, in the sea social media posts and selifes
, it has become hard for a worthy inovation
to reach our eye's and ears without using an a creation (a new device or process) resulting from study and experimentation
innovation
innovations
advertisment
, that may actually improve our lives. One a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
such
example is when one of my friends was suffering from hyperopia and didn't know about a solution untill
he come across an up to, before the time
until
advertisment
explaining a medical procedure that can fix his a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
far-sightedness
. He could a reduced ability to focus on near objects caused by loss of elasticity of the crystalline lens after age 45
farsightedness
finally
get rid of his glasses because of that advertisment
.
All in all I think a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
advertisments
do serve a purpose and introduce us with products that can improve our lives and at the same time can a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
also
persue
us into buying un-examine or consider with attention and in detail
peruse
pursue
parse
nececcasry
products. To counter this
we as consumers need to be more vigelant
and carefully observant or attentive; on the lookout for possible danger
vigilant
athourities
need to regulate the the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
authorities
advertisments
more tightly. So that the chances of getting a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
decived
are less.be false to; be dishonest with
deceived
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