Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In my personal opinion, things are not always black and white. More often
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
not, these are in the
gray
of an achromatic color of any lightness intermediate between the extremes of white and black
grey
zone and Advertising isn't
imune
relating to the condition of immunity
immune
to
this
phenomena. In
this
new age we are always
srounded
confined on all sides
surrounded
with
invotaions
the creation of something in the mind
inventions
, some are solutions to our
extremly
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely
painfull
causing physical or psychological pain
painful
problems and others are solutions still looking for a problem. To market these two kinds
excist
have an existence, be extant
exist
the two kinds of advertisement
stratigies
an elaborate and systematic plan of action
strategies
.
For example
, in the
relm
a domain in which something is dominant
realm
of
cosmatics
serving an esthetic rather than a useful purpose
cosmetics
cosmetic
, we were good
untill
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to
until
experts were
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experts, were
coming up with
new line
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a new line
of
products but
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products, but
then
when the new
invoation
the creation of something in the mind
invention
became
stegnant
not circulating or flowing
stagnant
they started to differentiate in terms of, day products and night products, men's products and women's products, products around a natural element like charcoal and
alovera
etc. These new
form
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forms
of products
needs
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need
advertisments
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
that encourage buyers into buying these products. That in reality are not too different from their
contemprary
characteristic of the present
contemporary
contemporaries
products.
However
, in the sea social media posts and
selifes
, it has become hard for a worthy
inovation
a creation (a new device or process) resulting from study and experimentation
innovation
innovations
to reach our eye's and ears without using an
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
, that may actually improve our lives. One
such
example is when one of my friends was suffering from hyperopia and didn't know about a solution
untill
up to, before the time
until
he come across an
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
explaining a medical procedure that can fix his
far-sightedness
a reduced ability to focus on near objects caused by loss of elasticity of the crystalline lens after age 45
farsightedness
. He could
finally
get rid of his glasses because of that
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
. All in all I think
advertisments
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
do serve a purpose and introduce us with products that can improve our lives and at the same time can
also
persue
examine or consider with attention and in detail
peruse
pursue
parse
us into buying un-
nececcasry
products. To counter
this
we as consumers need to be more
vigelant
carefully observant or attentive; on the lookout for possible danger
vigilant
and
athourities
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
authorities
need to regulate the
advertisments
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
more tightly. So that the chances of getting
decived
be false to; be dishonest with
deceived
are less.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • persuade
  • manipulative
  • unnecessary
  • excessive
  • artificial needs
  • desires
  • consumers
  • oversaturation
  • impulse buying
  • financial problems
  • inform
  • educate
  • features
  • benefits
  • innovations
  • raise awareness
  • social issues
  • positive behavior
  • enrich
  • well-being
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