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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these TV shows and books are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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The novels and serials related to crime are becoming more popular in most of the countries as per my opinion. There are various reasons for
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 popularity and among them the main reason is the increasing number of crimes in these countries and
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 can be generation interest and choice. In the following paragraph, I will discuss the reason elaborately.
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 with, In most of the country's crimes is increasing at a very high speed. The misdeed like theft, Robbery, murders, suicides, and many more. The murders are more common nowadays. The felony novels and dramas aware the people about all the scenarios happening around us.
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, there is serial like C.I.D which is very much popular among the public as human get the idea that how someone can mislead them. By
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 public become aware of all these cases and keep themselves safe. To continue with, In my opinion the case is actually increasing due to problems like unemployment and poverty. In order to aware of
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 cases, it is good to see the dramas based on an actual story of someones life. It helps us to being alert about the breach and gives the idea of how to protect yourself if that same situation occurs to us. If I read the crime novels, that to help me on how to keep myself safe. To continue with, Due to increase number of crimes in many countries, it is important to show that crimes through some medium like novels and dramas, so that people come to know about the scenario. By
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 they will be alert at every time.
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