Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In
this
modern era, the internet is accessible in every part of the country, which offered the privilege of access to the various kinds of services at the fingertip. Certainly, I believe
this
is a positive development in technology. In
this
essay, positive impacts of instant services will be discussed
first
, followed by negative impacts.
Firstly
, with the introduction of smartphones, people have access to e-commerce, services application like
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,
uber
, online banking, etc. With a few button clicks.
For instance
. Gone are the days when we had to stand in a long queue and wait for hours to get the billing done in shopping centre or to pay the utility bills. Currently, all these can be done in few seconds. One of the most advantageous things is we can do
this
anywhere, because it works in mobiles, laptop, tablets etc.
However
, instant services
also
have fewer negative impacts on average earning people.
For instance
, in order to avail the instant services, user needs to pay extra money, and
this
facility is only available in some of the major cities of the country,
also
everything is dependent on the connection speed of the internet, if the connection is poor, people tend to lose patience and get annoyed. To conclude, if the present generation wants to get everything done instantly,
that is
because they grew up using the internet technology. While
this
trend is largely positive, in my opinion, too much of anything is good for nothing,
hence
, I feel over dependence on anything is bad.
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