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Some people believe that uniform should be compulsory for workplaces, while other says that it is not important. Discuss both views and give opinion.

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People have contrasting views, whether to have a mandatory dress code at the workstation or not. In my opinion, garments only needed to be fixed for
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, where it is required, or else it could be kept free of choice. On the one hand, having a constant outfit promotes business and ensures safety. When service holders wear common clothes with unique design, colour combination and logo, it creates a brand image among the consumers, and they are easily identified by the others.
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, some of the tasks are very risky to perform,
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 as the handling of the car manufacturing machine, where putting a suitable garment is highly required to rescue the workers from an accident.
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, a uniform is very helpful to market the product as well as avoid perilous situation.
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, general people easily recognise the service holders of KFC by their red shirt with black pants and the attached logo.
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, flexibility of wearing drives productivity. Because, putting on costumes according to own choice gives a sense of confidence among the employees as they can apply their own preferences.
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, they might feel more comfortable as they are not obliged to wear same clothes every day; which is quite boring and might let them fatigue due to the usual heavy materials of the costumes.
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, the relaxation workers get by choosing the suitable clothes make them to be more attached with the
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 and perform their best.
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, a survey conducted by "Fashion feel.
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 a fixed dress code is conducive to develop an identity for any organization, freedom of choice encourages to
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 passively.
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, it would be better to oblige workers to wear common costumes, considering the type of
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