Companies sponsoring sports events for advertising purposes? What are the advantages and disadvantages for this?

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Over the

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few decades, sports events have become more commercialized than ever before. Huge companies are trying to invest money on the advertisement through sport teams, championships and athletes/players to increase their income. In

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essay we will discuss both advantages and disadvantages below. There are a number of strong arguments in favour of allowing companies to invest as much money as possible in global tournaments along with some smaller leagues.

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, throughout the history of humanity sport had been always mainly a hobby rather than an industry.

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, sportsmen were always financially struggling to maintain their occupation and to afford their basic needs. By giving the opportunity for companies to invest in

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kind of agreement beneficial for the both sides.

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, since the main engine of the economy is commercials, by forbidding them to place advertisement, the government might stagnate the growth of the economy.

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, the State should not prevent or block any advertisement contract so the country could have its own benefits from them.

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, by making athletic events fully commercial, we risk facing several problems.

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, people who are truly passionate about their sport would end up struggling to overwhelm those competitors who only came to the tournament with more material goals, to make money.

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type of people might find new ways of cheating,

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as taking steroids, injecting adrenaline and bribing judges so they can get around truly motivated competitors.

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, there is always a chance that the championship eventually might become a competition not between teams or sportsmen but between companies deciding who can invest more.

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, participant without proper investment or investor siding with him will be out of the league. In conclusion, from the points from above, one will clearly see that there are benefits

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as keeping players in line and economic growth, but

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a huge threat of fully commercialized power struggle between investors and dishonest competitors.

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