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some people think that national sports teams and individual men and women who represent their country should be financially supported by the government. However, other argue that they should be funded by the non-government sources. Discuss both views and give opinion.

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Sports are the recreational activities which act as a source of entertainment for the whole
country
. Some people assert that professional players and teams should be sponsored by the
government
 while others believe that non- governmental organizations should be responsible for funding. I completely agree with the former notion. The standpoints related to both the opinions are described below along with personal opinion. To embark with, the
government
 should fund the sports members.
Firstly
, sports person
feel
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feels
 a sense of responsibility on their shoulders, when higher authorities support them. Due to
this
, they are instilled with enough zest and zeal to bring medals for their countries. Apart from
this
, patriotism gets inculcated among citizens as well as sportsmen. As, in competitions motivation for people of one's
country
 brings enthusiasm in the minds of the players.
Hence
, there is positive impact on their performance while supported by the
government
. Pondering towards another view that some business sources should sponsors players.
Initially
, it would help to reduce the burden on
country's economy
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the country's economy
a country's economy
. Because there are major issues in
country
Suggestion
a country
the country
countries
such
 as poverty, illiteracy, lack of basic facilities and
etc
, which need urgent attention.
Thus
, funds can be diverted towards these problems rather than sports. Apart from
this
, business tycoons get an opportunity to promote themselves at international level. So, their profits would incline and more revenue will be generated for the
government
. To conclude, it can be said that
although
 non-
government
 organizations can easily provide funding to sportsmen, but, they will do it merely for the purpose of profit.
Hence
, I believe that if
government
 aids, sports players,
then
 they can play better and make their
country
 proud which can open doors for having cordial relations with other countries.
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