Some people think that the purpose of TV news programs is to entertain viewers. Others believe that news programs should be educational and informative. What do you think the purpose of TV news programs is? Support your opinion with reasons and examples.

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In recent decades, the question for aims of

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news has been

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throughout the world. In my opinion,

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of being entertaining, it is better for

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news to be educational and informative. On the one hand,

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news should act as an incentive for people to enhance their knowledge which is crucial for their entire life. One of the compelling reason is that

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individuals are likely to release stress by entertaining programs, they can hardly learn from these moments which are susceptible to their inactive brain.

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the reasons why educational news is capable of

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keep from happening or arising; make impossible

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people from those addicted

programs including

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programs, including

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news series

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, since individuals are often busy in their whole

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days, especially

by working and studying, they find limited time to boost their understandings.

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news should be educational in order to ensure that individuals can gain knowledge in any moments of their life.

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news is required to be

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more informative

rather than entertaining.

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, by watching

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news on the regular

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a relation that provides the foundation for something

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, people are likely to update vital

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as wars and environment worldwide.

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, BBC news has been including a variety of updates around the world which allow their audiences to obtain necessary

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, BBC program has been receiving the supports of people from all

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of age to see whenever they want to update

information

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, if

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news

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entertaining programs, viewers can hardly truth them by what they provide which contributes to the declining of views. In fact, since the main purpose of TC news programs is to update new

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the right direction regardless of complaints of their customers. In conclusion, news on

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should take steps to educate and inform their viewers by updating news.

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