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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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People have many different views about sharing
information especially
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information, especially
 in scientific research, business and the academic world. While some people consider that the
information
 can be shared as much as feasible, but I think everything
need
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needs
needed
 a limit and sharing info
also
 does. In terms of sharing as much
information
 as possible, scientists can economize on time and effort to find out or invest a collection of equipment, technologies, etc.
Also
, researchers can develop
technologies
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technology
base
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based
 on the knowledge which was realized in the past.
For instance
, when the internet was invented, there are varied applications had been developed. So that it
is not only help
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is not only helping
has not only helped
 people approach accessible data or publish your researches on the Internet but
also
 impulse the development of civilization.
On the other hand
, there are several disadvantages for government and businessperson who share too much
information
 about them.
For example
, the authority of your country
can not
can not
cannot
 tolerate accessing their research about nuclear, chemical or biological weapons from all of the people by the reasons of that
information
 is sensitive and confidential. If terrorist organizations pick up that info, it can lead to wars or acts of terrorism. In the other field – business –
a
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
 various corporations
such
 as Apple, Samsung need to keep what technology applied in their products in secret to compete in the technological race. In conclusion, it seems to me that there are many benefits of
distribute
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distributing
distributed
 knowledge related to science. But in certain aspects which are mentioned as
business
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a business
 or governmental research, it can be an enormous problem if they share their own result.
Thus
, people should be clever at sharing
information
 in the right situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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