Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is thought that students who have excellent academic performances should be rewarded at school. While others argue that rewarding for

improvement

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improving

students should be given more importance than that of other students. I believe that schools should reward students who have the best studying outcome and progress. On the one hand, there are some reasons why most schools prefer giving awards for the highest achiever at schools.

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approach will make students who have average or bad studying results consider people with the highest outcomes as a good example to try better.

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could create a highly competitive studying

environment

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the environment

at schools. Students will be encouraged to study hard and gain the highest scores in the classroom.

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, pupils who are gifted could be given more opportunities to enrich deeper knowledge and nurture their abilities.

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, in Vietnam many schools choose students achieving the highest grades

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extra classes to provide them profound knowledge which help them to gain high level in national competitions.

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, rewarding pupils who make progress in studying

result

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resulted

in more favourable outcomes. The

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benefit is that adopting

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this methods

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this method

these methods

could give equal chances for every student to receive awards.

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of feeling pressure and disappointment when competing with their top classmates, students who make strides in their studies will feel motivated if they are rewarded for making significant progress. Another benefit is that the number of students who intend to drop out of schools will be reduced significantly. Nowadays, students are always under lots of pressure from studying and assignments in their classroom.

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, bad studying results make pupils feel tedious and

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, they decide to leave

schools

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school

.

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why giving awards when they make strides in studying is the best way to inspire and motivate them to study harder. In conclusion, giving awards to those who have excellent academic performances and improved their level of academic performances is beneficial for them.