The government should sometimes infringe on people’s freedom for the security of society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The issue of whether the authority figures have right to intervene in their

inhabitants’s

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inhabitant’s

daily life for the sake of security of society is a

controvesial

marked by or capable of arousing controversy

controversial

one.

Inspite

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In spite

of some arguments that it would be

abhorrant

offensive to the mind

abhorrent

if the government did so, I reckon that the democracy of

citizen

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citizens

should not be unchecked. Two of

principal reasons

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the principal reasons

for

this

are as follows.

First

of all, national safety

willbe

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will be

guaranteed provided that the jurisdiction restricts the law and

intrudesreasonably

in people’s private life.Since the 21th century has witnessed an extensive international integration among various countries, overwhelming nations are becoming cosmopolitan.

Furthermore

, plenty advantages as the trend brings about, it

also

gives rise to imminent risks which pose

detrimental threat

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a detrimental threat

detrimental threats

the detrimental threat

on everyone routine

such

as

territorism

the calculated use of violence (or the threat of violence) against civilians in order to attain goals that are political or religious or ideological in nature; this is done through intimidation or coercion or instilling fear

terrorism

, contagious

deseases

an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning

diseases

disease

…

Thus

, the government’s role

is

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has been

of the greatest significance ever before, which is likely to categorize various foreigners and take them under control. Take the

covid

having or marked by a curve or smoothly rounded bend

curved

-19 pandemic for an example, if it had been for the party’s attempt to force people to do social distancing and put on medical masks, human beings must have suffered from massive loss and economic depression.

In addition

, almost every country is capable of forming peaceful, civilized and liveable society thanks to the authority’s initiative of suitable interfering

in

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with

individual

liberity

immunity from arbitrary exercise of authority: political independence

liberty

. Supposing that people didn’t observe the law and perform on principal,

serveral

(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many

several

criminals might take place, leading to chaotic incident.

For instance

, appropriate departments have installed numerous closed-circuit televisions

in junctions

a formal command or admonition

injunctions

, roundabouts with a view to ensuring that citizens comply seriously to the law and do not cause accidents. By way of conclusion, I once again restate my position that it is crucial the freedom of dwellers be under control by the government. Not only does

this

initiative

help

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helps

to prevent potential

hazards but

Accept comma addition

hazards, but

it

also

creates a more liveable and high-cultivated society.