In the modern world, mobile and smartphone use has become universal in most parts of the world. Although there are clearly many advantages of this technology, there are many who believe it also brings many disadvantages. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
Over the
last
two decades almost
everyone in the world has bought or used a mobile phone. With Accept comma addition
decades, almost
this
technological development many people feel that there are a lot of advantages but
others feel that there may be some disadvantages.Starting with the advantages, it is clear that using mobile phones makes life a lot more convenient. Accept comma addition
advantages, but
For example
, it is possible to contact friends, colleagues and family in just a few seconds at any time of the day or from any location. Also
, mobile phones can be used to access a wide variety of data applications such
as Camille and social networking sites such
as Twitter or Facebook. This
is a benefit because people are able to interact on line
at all times. on a regular route of a railroad or bus or airline system
online
Finally mobile
phones give security and peace of mind to parents who are able to contact their children easily.
Accept comma addition
Finally, mobile
On the other
hand many
people believe that there are some clear disadvantages. Accept comma addition
hand, many
Firstly
, mobiles can make people anti-social as they spend more time looking at their phone than at each other. Moreover
, many people can become addicted to using smartphone apps, and this
can have an effect on their mental and physical health such
as their eyesight. It can also
affect young people whose studies or work maybe
affected by over use of their phones.
In conclusion, Suggestion
may be
although
there are several negatives to using mobile phones, I believe that overall there are more benefits to be had from using these devices. As long as people remember to talk to each other face-to-face and parents
control their children’s access to smartphone use, I believe there is no serious problem.Suggestion
parent
Submitted by Andy on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion