Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that when I was travelling to London on September 21st, on one of your flight number A380 from India, I left my handbag in the cabin area of the flight. This
happened when I was in a rush to catch my taxi waiting outside for me.
The bag is of back colour which has a logo of the band name Guess on the front. Besides
, it also
has extra zippers on each side. Inside are some of my important documents which contain my personal information. Additionally
, there are some clothes such
as hoodies, pants, and shoes in it and an expensive watch given by my wife on our first anniversary.
I hope your staff has already retrieved my bag from the flight, if so, then
you can let me know the best the to pick it up. But if you did not then
i
request you to do an investigation, so that I can get back my luggage.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
JohnChange the capitalization
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coherence cohesion
Your letter is structured very well and follows a logical sequence of events. However, minor grammatical errors can be corrected to improve coherence.
coherence cohesion
For instance, consider replacing 'The bag is of back colour' with 'The bag is black in color' for better clarity.
task achievement
You responded effectively to all parts of the prompt, providing a clear explanation, description, and request for action.
task achievement
Your tone is polite and formal, appropriate for a letter to an airline.
coherence cohesion
Your use of paragraphs to separate distinct ideas contributes to the letter's readability.
coherence cohesion
You included a well-structured greeting and closing, which is appropriate for formal letters.