Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that when I was travelling to London on September 21st, on one of your flight number A380 from India, I left my handbag in the cabin area of the flight.

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happened when I was in a rush to catch my taxi waiting outside for me. The bag is of back colour which has a logo of the band name Guess on the front.

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, it

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has extra zippers on each side. Inside are some of my important documents which contain my personal information.

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, there are some clothes

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as hoodies, pants, and shoes in it and an expensive watch given by my wife on our first anniversary. I hope your staff has already retrieved my bag from the flight, if so,

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you can let me know the best the to pick it up. But if you did not

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request you to do an investigation, so that I can get back my luggage. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, John

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coherence cohesion

Your letter is structured very well and follows a logical sequence of events. However, minor grammatical errors can be corrected to improve coherence.

coherence cohesion

For instance, consider replacing 'The bag is of back colour' with 'The bag is black in color' for better clarity.

task achievement

You responded effectively to all parts of the prompt, providing a clear explanation, description, and request for action.

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Your tone is polite and formal, appropriate for a letter to an airline.

coherence cohesion

Your use of paragraphs to separate distinct ideas contributes to the letter's readability.

coherence cohesion

You included a well-structured greeting and closing, which is appropriate for formal letters.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Unfortunate incident
Flight details
Distraction
Valuable possessions
Sentimental value
Lost and found procedure
Safe return
Compensation
Assistance
Gratitude
Follow-up

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