In many countries, governments pay for children's education in part or in full, acknowledging the expensive costs of this level of education. I believe that this policy brings about more advantages than disadvantages.

It is true that funding children's schooling is not an easy task for a number of reasons.
First
, doing so will
add
make an addition (to); join or combine or unite with others; increase the quality, quantity, size or scope of
Add
burdens on the state budget as it would need several years of continuous funding before a child
gets
come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
Gets
to another level of study. More importantly, in populous countries, the number of children getting
into
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Into
the
school
age only keeps rising and adds
pressures
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pressure
on government's budgets.
Second
,
corruption
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Corruption
can be a concern in countries where transparency barely exists.
For example
, in Vietnam, if
the
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The
government is to subsidise children's
education
, chances are that corrupt local authorities will
manipulate
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Manipulate
numbers to steal tax-payers' money. Despite above considerations, I am convinced that supporting families in paying for their
children
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children's
'
education
offers
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Offers
more good than bad.
First
,
this
will promote the
education
-for-all agenda and improve equality
among
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Among
school
children. To explain, since many families cannot afford to pay for their children's schooling,
their
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Their
children may not be able to go to
school
without government's financial support.
This
leads to an
inequality
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Inequality
in access to basic
education
that children have to experience from an early age.
Furthermore
,
governments'
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government
government's
subsidies for children's
education
herald their far-sighted vision when they
invest
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Invest
in future generations. Since many talents can come from a poor background, missing the
opportunity
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An opportunity
Opportunity
to get them to
school
equals a missed opportunity to nurture a talent which can make a
great
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Great
contribution to the country later on. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that free (or partly free) schooling should be provided for children
for
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in
the
above
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Above
-mentioned reasons. More importantly, doing so will put words into actions and shows that
governments
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Governments
are taking children's
education
seriously.
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