Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The debate between economic
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and the
environment
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has always been controversial. While many people think economic
growth
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should be put to a halt for the sake of the
environment
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, I believe
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growth
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is the only solution
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to
hunger
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and
poverty
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, and stopping it is not an option at the moment. There is no denying that economic
growth
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is having detrimental effects on the
environment
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. Indeed, to make way for farmland and factories, we burn down forests, destroy habitats and displace various species. To produce and circulate goods faster, we employ millions of trucks and other vehicles which release tonnes of greenhouse gases to the atmosphere. These are only two of the many ways in which humans are damaging the
environment
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in favour of economic
growth
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. If we do not stop or find a way to limit our impact on the
environment
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, the consequences may be catastrophic. With that being said, I believe economic
growth
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is the only real answer to
poverty
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and
hunger
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, and
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, we cannot afford to dismiss it. Indeed, different models of wealth distribution have been tried throughout our
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history, but
none of them seemed to have been able to completely eliminate
hunger
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and
poverty
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. In any of these structures of society, there were always rich and poor people; and there was always a possibility of the latter being
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subject
to impoverishment and starvation.
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, if the economy continues to grow and reaches a certain threshold, even the least well-off will eventually be lifted out of the
poverty
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line and will have enough food. Admittedly, none of the current economies on earth have reached
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level yet, but we can clearly see where the patterns are leading us looking at the statistics regarding
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and famine in rich and poor nations.
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, to prevent
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growth
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is something we cannot afford because while to some developed nations, a complete halt in GPD
growth
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may be of little consequence, to some poor family in certain countries, it may mean the difference between having enough food to put on the table or staying hungry or malnourished. In conclusion, I’m an ardent believer in economic
growth
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being the real answer to
poverty
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and
hunger
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,
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, it should not be stopped despite the harm it causes to our
environment
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.
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