Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the present day, more and more newly invented medicines and other goods are being experimented on
animals
to identify their effects.
While
many people believe that these
experiments
are immoral and should be forbidden
due to
the suffering of
animals
, others argue that they bring numerous advantages to human
being
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. Personally, I strongly agree with the former view and suppose that
experiments
on
animals
are unacceptable. On the one hand, conducting
experiments
on
animals
can have many upsides
to
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humanity. Doing
this
could help to test the body reaction of the
products
prior to their release;
therefore
, chemists and scientists would be able to
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precautions and would
then
alter the
products
to increase
the
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effectiveness. Medicine,
for instance
, must be tested to see its side effects and
hence
, pharmacists could warn their customers when they buy the product to cause
least
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harm. Animal
experiments
,
on the other hand
, are inhumane and should definitely be eradicated.
Firstly
, it is against the
animals
’ rights to live and the side effects of the
products
could have inevitable negative impacts on
animals
. The outcomes could range anywhere from nausea or
faint
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to fatality;
thus
, it is morally wrong to cause
animals
suffer
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.
Moreover
, there have been many breakthroughs in the biological field which could become an alternative to animal
experiments
such
as synthetic
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.
This
kind of experiment is much more suitable and
favorable
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since it is a computer simulation made for testing
products
and there is no use
of
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living bodies. In conclusion, despite the upsides that
experiments
on
animal
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bring, I believe that they should be banned
due to
their cruelty towards
animals
. Scientists should use other substitutes to test their new
products
so that there would not be any harm
on
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either humans or
animals
.
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