Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the present day, more and more newly invented medicines and other goods are being experimented on
animals
to identify their effects. Use synonyms
While
many people believe that these Linking Words
experiments
are immoral and should be forbidden Use synonyms
due to
the suffering of Linking Words
animals
, others argue that they bring numerous advantages to human Use synonyms
being
. Personally, I strongly agree with the former view and suppose that Fix the agreement mistake
beings
experiments
on Use synonyms
animals
are unacceptable. On the one hand, conducting Use synonyms
experiments
on Use synonyms
animals
can have many upsides Use synonyms
to
humanity. Doing Change preposition
for
this
could help to test the body reaction of the Linking Words
products
prior to their release; Use synonyms
therefore
, chemists and scientists would be able to Linking Words
have
precautions and would Verb problem
take
then
alter the Linking Words
products
to increase Use synonyms
the
effectiveness. Medicine, Change the word
their
for instance
, must be tested to see its side effects and Linking Words
hence
, pharmacists could warn their customers when they buy the product to cause Linking Words
least
harm. Animal Change the article
the least
experiments
, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, are inhumane and should definitely be eradicated. Linking Words
Firstly
, it is against the Linking Words
animals
’ rights to live and the side effects of the Use synonyms
products
could have inevitable negative impacts on Use synonyms
animals
. The outcomes could range anywhere from nausea or Use synonyms
faint
to fatality; Replace the word
fainting
thus
, it is morally wrong to cause Linking Words
animals
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suffer
. Add the particle
to suffer
Moreover
, there have been many breakthroughs in the biological field which could become an alternative to animal Linking Words
experiments
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such
as syntheticLinking Words
environment
. Fix the agreement mistake
environments
This
kind of experiment is much more suitable and Linking Words
favorable
since it is a computer simulation made for testing Change the spelling
favourable
products
and there is no use Use synonyms
of
living bodies. In conclusion, despite the upsides that Change preposition
for
experiments
on Use synonyms
animal
bring, I believe that they should be banned Fix the agreement mistake
animals
due to
their cruelty towards Linking Words
animals
. Scientists should use other substitutes to test their new Use synonyms
products
so that there would not be any harm Use synonyms
on
either humans or Change preposition
to
animals
.Use synonyms
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