Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, inadequate employment and lacking of money

are now considered

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now consider

two factors that influence mostly

in

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on

individual well-being.

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, people choose two different ways to react those circumstances, while numerous people think that acceptance those situations is the appropriate choice, others believe regulation is the perfect answer to the math. On the one hand, no doubt that undergoing difficulties is not unpleasant for everyone and that might be lead to

enhancing

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enhanced

the circumstances.

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, the process of upgrading complex problems which may influence our self-learning. In others word, improving issues in employment will boost self-learning and

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similarly

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similarity

, promotions will raise and higher salary is the upshot.

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, attempt to stand right at the

beginning sometimes

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beginning, sometimes

doesn’t rely on people because of their burdens are

hang

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hung

above their heads. Due to the fact that they need money to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

their bills, they are going to be

diligent worker

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a diligent worker

for the rest of their lives whether they do not seek opportunities to accommodate the conditions.

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, there is another way to tackle troubles in awful cases, which is acceptance.

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, whether you are well-able in life or not, there are always some incidents that you could not have sufficient capability to

undertaking

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undertake

. Life is full of plentiful surprises, somewhat they are inevitable and unchangeable,

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, nothing is considered the best as opposed to smiling and patience till those adversities walk through.

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, in some field alike accountant, becoming wealthy might be hopeless apart from obtaining lobby. In conclusion, I totally agree with the latter notion while accepting the former could

right

produce a literary work

write

in some extent. Improving hardships may be far better,

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, considering to calm and undertake the best in

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

realms could be extremely brilliant in some circumstances.