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Task: in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
Newspapers or books, a kind of conveying the latest information nowadays
,
Accept space
,
have been playing a crucial role in our society.
however
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However
, it is believed that those kinds of
communication
 will be replaced by modern ones
,
Accept space
,
which is free and way more convenient. From my own standpoint
,
Accept space
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 completely concur with
this
 statement
,
Accept space
,
but
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 believe all
kind
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kinds
 of printed papers will probably contribute somewhat in our society
.
Accept space
.
 There are several reasons why the printed patterns of transferring knowledge will be out of date in the future.
First
 and foremost, with the high-speed development of
internet
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the internet
 as well as technology today, virtual newspaper websites can be easily designed and people could browse them on the internet.
Secondly
, we are all living in the exploding age of social media platforms: Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, internet users
are
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is
 likely to have a chance to approach news and knowledge more efficiently than they were in the 1990s
,
Accept space
,
when there were only basic forms of
communication
.
On the other hand
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 am convinced that printed newspapers or books still have a significant position in society. From
enterprises' perspective
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an enterprises' perspective
, manufacturing newspapers or books, a traditional Industry, could probably be lucrative and even create a number of jobs for the unemployment. From
authorities' perspective
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an authorities' perspective
the authorities' perspective
,
this
 industry can pay a huge taxation for the national budget to keep managing the regime. In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 am of the opinion that the obsolete printed forms of
communication
 will be replaced in the near future and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 highly recommend that the government should strongly
impulse
compel to behave in a certain way
impose
 the advance of modern terms of
communication
.
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  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
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  • internet
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