Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In general, paying taxes
are considered
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is considered
as
enormous contribution
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an enormous contribution
to the
society
. But, due to the modern changes in the world, a
partof
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part of
people say that they need to provide more contribution to their
society
. In
this
essay we are going
discuss
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to discuss
about these views and
also
provide our opinion.
Firstly
, the introduction of taxes
were brought
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was brought
to contribute more to the community, by the eligible
contributers
someone who contributes (or promises to contribute) a sum of money
contributors
contributor
.
This
, reduces the workload of government, particularly, in
areas
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the areas
of investing in new projects.
Additionally
, it
also
reduces the chance of
richer person
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a richer person
to hold on to his property for
long time
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a long time
.
For instance
: The
survey conducted
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survey, conducted
by the government department announces that the tax from the riches alone contributes about 30 percent of the budget for upcoming projects. But, for
this
reason, we can say that tax payment is a providence to the
society
, but not enough for the modern world.
Regardlessof
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Regardless of
the above view,
secondly
, in
present situation
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the present situation
, officials are unable to find enough manpower to clean or repair the damage on the environment.
For example
:
Eventhough
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Even though
, technology and evolving modernization has brought us a lot of comfort, the after effects of the same is much
troublesome
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more troublesome
. And, till date we are not able to improve on our natural environment. In these situations, every person's responsibility of planting
tress
a tall perennial woody plant having a main trunk and branches forming a distinct elevated crown; includes both gymnosperms and angiosperms
trees
, reducing pollution levels etc., can be seen as one of the improvement
for
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in
the
society
's future.
Hence
, we need something more than money repayment. In conclusion, we need to give back as much as possible to the community and should not set any limitations in the name of money repayment's alone.
Finally
, in my opinion, we
also
should encourage
humans
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the humans
to take responsibility of his providence towards the
society
,
in addition
to the material payback.
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