Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

To a certain extent I agree that authorities should be the one who are responsible for preserving the

environment

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However I

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However, I

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think that ordinary people play an important role in environmental preservation. Nowadays, with social media, the threats which are facing our planet is commonly known by almost

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, and it clearly too big for any individual to deal with. A lot of politicians’s involvement and cooperation

is needed

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are needed

to recover from global warming, terrible storms.To do that, we need the funds which the governments are able to provide. So that, the politicians have the ability and the responsibility to preserve the

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, our world. On the other hands, people are the majority part of the whole society, so if

everyone

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had the awareness to obey the rules that help protecting the

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,

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preservation would not be a problem.

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, we can contribute to the work with numerous

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ways, such

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as cycling,

plan

buildings for carrying on industrial labor

plant

trees and so on

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of using petrol engines, cut down green trees. If trees are still

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speed,

oneday

moving or permitting movement in one direction only

one-way

one day

our oxygen will run out.

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protection is important,

everyone

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know

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knows

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should care. In conclusion, both governments and individuals should give their hands to protect our fragile precious world.