Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking, dressing.... should not be taught. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education is the foundation of
ethic
culture and Suggestion
ethical
also
the top national policy that most countries prioritize in. It not only plays an influence not only over the formation of human personality and moral qualities but
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qualities, but
also
the main source of human resources training
from which people acquire academic Accept comma addition
resources, training
knowledge
and essential life
skills such
as cooking, dressing... Although
both of them are considered to be equally vital, there is are many opposite opinions that it is much more important to focus on teaching students academic
Suggestion
the academic knowledge
knowledge
rather than life
skills so that they can pass the exams. On
my own Suggestion
In
view point
, I’m absolutely in disagreement with a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
this
idea.
It can be seen that the greatest discrepancy between student and student is their stocks of knowledge examining
assessing the academic levels of each others every individual student. Accept comma addition
knowledge, examining
However
, that may not say it all, most of the schools and employers are all prioritizing applicants that demonstrate their capabilities in life
skills instead
of purely academic achievements. Moreover
, it is recognized that (holes) gaps in academic (information) knowledge
are easily filled while missing life
skills are (much harder to teach) could have a knock-on effect on their opportunities in the future, therefore
the students should be taught those skills otherwise
they’ll have non awareness of may not be well prepared for dealing with situations surrounding them (what it takes to function on their own). Learning life
skills helps individuals develop potentials and construct self-regulations to be more self-confident and well-arounded
well-rounded. curving and somewhat round in shape rather than jagged
rounded
Additionally
, it results in building confidence both in spoken skills and for group collaboration and cooperation. Life
skills also
make students regconise
the impact of their actions and teach them to take responsibility for what they do rather than blame for others.
If just paying attention to the academic show approval or appreciation of
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recognize
knowledge
, they will be passive and dependent more on things available, or more seriously, is they’re impossible to liberate and apply potential ability to improve themselves, easy to be seduced and depraved.
Overall, I suppose that apart from teaching students academic knowledge
, schools should organize some extracurricular activities in order to equip them with indispensable life
skills and parents extend their roles as caregivers to support their children’s increasing interests, often cooking, cleaning and scheduling their life
lives far longer than appropriate so that they can cope with obstacles in life
, confidently stand on the path of life
, and succeed in their careers.Submitted by Andy on
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