The advantages of English spreading as a global language will continue to outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, English has become one of the most popular
language
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languages
in the word. In my opinion, it has more advantages than disadvantages. English has become an ideal way to communicate between different countries and help people get
more closer
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closer
.
Firstly
, it is easier for employees to discuss their task by English which is a common
language
.
For example
, in my job we usually have
English presentation
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an English presentation
with other coworkers in Singapore, and using English help us express clearly our strategy for coworkers.
Secondly
, English creates a flat word with Internet students can find and gain any knowledge that they want to learn in their courses.
For instance
, my younger sister who
are studying
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is studying
in
university
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the university
, usually search
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
short course online in English to improve herself and prepare for
future job
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future jobs
a future job
.
Speading
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Speeding
Speaking
as a global
language
also
has more
disadvatages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
in terms of disappearing minor
language
. Young people just focus on learning English and they are likely to forget to improve their mother
tounge
a mobile mass of muscular tissue covered with mucous membrane and located in the oral cavity
tongue
language
which
is tend
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will tend
to
disappearing
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disappear
in the future.
For example
, in Vietnam, minor
language
in the north
tend
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tends
to vanish these days because children spend less time using it and there are less and less books teaching these languages. They still exist due to tongue,
therefore
, government should encourage minor popularities to study
this languages
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these languages
this language
. In conclusion,
although
there are some benefits of using English as a global
languages
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language
, it does have some negative effects on
population
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the population
populations
.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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