Nowadays more and more people hold the important positions in the government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have a different viewpoint about whether or not letting youngsters hold a crucial position in the governmental bodies.

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some have a negative opinion about

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trend I believe that

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trend that I believe

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phenomenon is beneficial to some extent On the one hand, plenty of evidence and arguments could easily be found to prove that adolescents take a key role in the state at the expense of society.

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, they are in excess of confident and

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venture, but

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a lack

a lake

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of diplomatic perspective. While those sensitive fields require people with skills and experiences. Because even a minor mistake might put the relationship among other nations in jeopardy.

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, young people are considered to be impatient to deal with national.

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, a hasty making decision could make a detrimental impact on the lives of thousands of people.

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, it seems to me that young leaders have a myriad of benefits compared with the elderly. In the

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place, they have

physical health

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the physical health

, coupled with a creative mind and strong energy which gives them particular styles of management.

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, the state could take advantage of

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huge strength, giving them a

chance to dedicate to

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chance to dedicate

the nation to make a breakthrough idea. In the

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place, in

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day and age, young generations have a substantially positive feature when it comes to state-of-the-art technology. As a consequence, they may know to integrate technological advancements into imposing policies as well as other aspects of life to create innovative breakthrough policies which helps to operate national systems more effectively, gain a competitive edge over other countries. In conclusion,

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many people champion by their thought that the possession of teenagers in a part of authority exists some drawbacks. The opposite persuades me, which means

young

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younger

generations should be given a chance of being selected in the state.