Many people think young people should follow traditions. Others argue that young people should be free to be individuals. Discuss both views
There is
an
controversial Suggestion
a
issues
that the young should follow the traditions of their nation or being unlimited to behave. In my point of view, these Suggestion
issue
idea
are true in some way and these will be discussed in Suggestion
ideas
this
essay.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that the every culture and tradition
have its own value. In terms of spirit, the tradition
brings to us a plenty of moral lessons, life values. For example
, in Vietnam, still keep the custom of remodeling the grave for the deceased as a show of gratitude to them. Regardless of material, the historical site have still been remained our forefather's values and made a great contribution to tourism. Therefore
, the tradition
should be inherited and promoted by the young.
On the other hand
, the world changes from day to day, if we continue to not remove the evil customs, we can not
catch up with general can not
cannot
tend
. turn sharply; change direction abruptly
trend
For example
, in ancient time, traditionally, the girl should get married when she is 15 year
old. TodaySuggestion
years
,
we all know that Accept space
,
at
15 is not a suitable age for a Suggestion
of
women
to have a family, especially for childbirth. Suggestion
woman
Therefore
, instead
of being asked to follow traditional code in every step, young people should be encourage
to express themselves freely, choose Suggestion
should be encouraged
what
appropriate to them. Beside that, the young can explore their true potential to broaden their horizon of knowledge by visiting different countries. In fact, to catch up with modernization, the young Suggestion
what's
can not
simply follow can not
cannot
tradition
,
they should be free to adapt Accept space
,
with
the changes of Suggestion
to
world
, the new trend.
To sum up, I believe that many traditions should be kept and followed, but at the same time, young people should have the right to behave as themselves while they are still searching for their own personal identity.Suggestion
the world
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