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Many people think young people should follow traditions. Others argue that young people should be free to be individuals. Discuss both views

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There is
an
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a
 controversial
issues
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issue
 that the young should follow the traditions of their nation or being unlimited to behave. In my point of view, these
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ideas
 are true in some way and these will be discussed in
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 essay. On the one hand, it is undeniable that the every culture and
tradition
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 have its own value. In terms of spirit, the
tradition
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 brings to us a plenty of moral lessons, life values.
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, in Vietnam, still keep the custom of remodeling the grave for the deceased as a show of gratitude to them. Regardless of material, the historical site have still been remained our forefather's values and made a great contribution to tourism.
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, the
tradition
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 should be inherited and promoted by the young.
On the other hand
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, the world changes from day to day, if we continue to not remove the evil customs, we
can not
can not
cannot
 catch up with general
tend
turn sharply; change direction abruptly
trend
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, in ancient time, traditionally, the girl should get married when she is 15
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years
 old. Today
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 we all know that
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of
 15 is not a suitable age for a
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woman
 to have a family, especially for childbirth.
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,
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 of being asked to follow traditional code in every step, young people
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should be encouraged
 to express themselves freely, choose
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what's
 appropriate to them. Beside that, the young can explore their true potential to broaden their horizon of knowledge by visiting different countries. In fact, to catch up with modernization, the young
can not
can not
cannot
 simply follow
tradition
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 they should be free to adapt
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to
 the changes of
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the world
, the new trend. To sum up, I believe that many traditions should be kept and followed, but at the same time, young people should have the right to behave as themselves while they are still searching for their own personal identity.

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