Nowdays, sports is a big buiness with high earnings for professional sports people and companies involved both financially . Positive or negative development?
These days, professional athletes can earn a great deal of
money
as sports have become a lucrative business
Furthermore
, this
business
is impacted by firms due to their engagement in finance through various ways, such
as sponsorships. In my opinion, this
phenomenon is both beneficial and detrimental.
On the one hand, there are two major disadvantages of turning sports into business
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a business
Firstly
, when sports become a lucrative industry and money
plays a key role, match-fixing will arise. Sportsmen may be lured by large amounts of money
, therefore
they may commit some criminal activities such
as betting, gambling, corruption,...Secondly
, in order to win an incredible monetary award, a few sportsmen resort to illegal performance-enhancing drugs. By using them, they not only deteriorate
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aren't only deteriorating
health but
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health, but
also
engage in unfair competition. As a result
, sport's primary value is ruined and sports lovers are disappointed.
On the other hand
, pouring money
into sports and making it become a huge business
are greatly beneficial to the development of this
field. Firstly
, high salaries make
sports more attractive to young talents, which would contribute to the country with a large number of potential outstanding athletes. When they find the earnings in Suggestion
makes
this
field worthy, they are inspired to have a greater passion for choosing a sports career and have a huger
motivation for training hard to become professionals. Suggestion
huge
Secondly
, when sports become an industry, athletes' performance in competition would be enhanced. By allocating a great deal of money
in this
field, these companies provide sports players with more professional training and facilitate them with high-quality equipment. Being well-trained, they are likely to have more chance to get medals for themselves and win championships for their country.
In conclusion, although
there are some drawbacks about becoming a business
, I believe this
phenomenon is a positive development for sports because it helps draw young talents and also
improves athletes' performance.Submitted by Andy on
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