Some people think that there is a great influence of news media on people’s lives and this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.

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In the contemporary world, The media have been concentrating on publishing urgent problems and negative things rather than

positive one

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a positive one

positive ones

the positive one

there

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There

are many people who believe that

this

would have pernicious impacts on

people

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peoples'

peoples

lives.

although

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Although

it is undeniable to the advantages of the media, I totally agree with

this

notion.

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terms of individuals, the scenario of the increasing dependence of people on news outlets either print or non-print forms means that people have been instilled with skewed and unreliable information.

many

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Many

news channels

perpetually

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perpetual

loop the same pieces of news all day long, hammering them in the minds of unsuspecting audiences.

these

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These

media are often corporate

sell-outs

an act of betrayal

sellouts

seats

sellouts'

that publish news to earn profits or boost their ratings, and negatively cater to

masses

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the masses

by putting out the most sensational news stories.

for

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For

example, Dantri - a popular news channel in Vietnam- often takes overly-focused accounts of events

such

as the scandals of celebrities or anticipated demise of the human race, making people adopt bad viewpoints

with

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With

respect to society, the negative news widespread

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the media is thought to seed stereotypical judgments into people's thinkings, resulting in social disorders and chaos.

this

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This

is an

unfavorable

not encouraging or approving or pleasing

unfavourable

situation, especially in developing or underdeveloped countries where the majority of people are not rational to sift through

news

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the news

and recognize the truth.

As a result

, the audience will be thrown into the

state

of panic and jump into undesirable actions.

for

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For

example, the one-year-ago news

that

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That

the

state

will pay only 70 million VND maximum for those who own savings

accounts regardless

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accounts, regardless

of how much in the account if the national banks go bankrupt makes people withdraw all their money for fear of losing everything.

this

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This

paralyzed

affected with paralysis

paralysed

the

state

banking system for several months, causing big losses to Vietnam.

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n conclusion, I completely believe that the excessively negative influences of the media to people are undeniable, driving people into the

state

of fear, distorted thoughts, and society in a

state

of instability

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Topic Vocabulary:

influence societal norms
sensationalism
misinformation
undue stress
media bias
skew public perception
polarized society
pessimistic worldview
relentless focus
raise awareness
foster important social changes
public opinion
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