Some people think that there is a great influence of news media on people’s lives and this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
In the contemporary world, The media have been concentrating on publishing urgent problems and negative things rather than
positive one
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a positive one
positive ones
the positive one
there
are many people who believe that Suggestion
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this
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people
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peoples'
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it is undeniable to the advantages of the media, I totally agree with Suggestion
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terms of individuals, the scenario of the increasing dependence of people on news outlets either print or non-print forms means that people have been instilled with skewed and unreliable information. Suggestion
In
many
news channels Suggestion
Many
perpetually
loop the same pieces of news all day long, hammering them in the minds of unsuspecting audiences. Suggestion
perpetual
these
media are often corporate Suggestion
These
sell-outs
that publish news to earn profits or boost their ratings, and negatively cater to an act of betrayal
sellouts
seats
sellouts'
masses
by putting out the most sensational news stories. Suggestion
the masses
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example, Dantri - a popular news channel in Vietnam- often takes overly-focused accounts of events Suggestion
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such
as the scandals of celebrities or anticipated demise of the human race, making people adopt bad viewpoints
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respect to society, the negative news widespread Suggestion
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the media is thought to seed stereotypical judgments into people's thinkings, resulting in social disorders and chaos. Suggestion
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unfavorable
situation, especially in developing or underdeveloped countries where the majority of people are not rational to sift through not encouraging or approving or pleasing
unfavourable
news
and recognize the truth. Suggestion
the news
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state
of panic and jump into undesirable actions. Use synonyms
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example, the one-year-ago news
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that
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That
state
will pay only 70 million VND maximum for those who own savings Use synonyms
accounts regardless
of how much in the account if the national banks go bankrupt makes people withdraw all their money for fear of losing everything. Accept comma addition
accounts, regardless
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this
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This
paralyzed
the affected with paralysis
paralysed
state
banking system for several months, causing big losses to Vietnam.Use synonyms
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n conclusion, I completely believe that the excessively negative influences of the media to people are undeniable, driving people into the Suggestion
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state
of fear, distorted thoughts, and society in a Use synonyms
state
of instabilityUse synonyms
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