Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there are more and more animal experiments are being done for medical and other purposes. While some people think that it is morally wrong and should be banned, I think we can permit the animal testings thanks to its benefit and right purposes. On the one hand, there

are

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variety of benefits that

animals

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animal

testing brings to the human. We can try some new medicines or vaccines in some animal having the similar genes with our human-being to

test

the use and safety of that. By testing on animals, we can learn more about the genetics of some other species and our genetics too. There

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a wide range of scientists are doing projects and

researchs

systematic investigation to establish facts

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about finding the new treatment for some diseases and

also

about the genetics

thus

the animal testings play an indispensable role in that scientists' work and

also

in our normal life too.

On the other hand

, the animal testings should not be

permited

consent to, give permission

permitted

promoted

to be done for some reasons.

Firstly

, it is considered to be cruel and may cause suffering to animals.

However

, the animal's genetics may be different from our humans so that may cause the wrong result. As some medicines can work well on

animals but

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animals, but

not on human or some can be used on

human but

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human, but

can cause illness and disease to animals. In conclusion, I think that animal testings are necessary nowadays and can be used widely since it has brought to us a variety of benefits.

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2nd DRAFT- 332 words) Nowadays, animal testings are becoming more and more well known and are used all over the world. While some people think that it is wrong to use innocent animals for experiments, I believe that we can permit animal experiments thanks to its benefits

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in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

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right purposes On the one hand, there

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a wide range of bright sides that animal testing brings to our world. There are some new medicines or drugs that have not been proved and used in

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humans, thus

humans thus

the human thus

thus

testing those medicines on some kind of animals is a great remedy. By that, we can now

test

the

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

and the safety of the new medicines so that people can easily use them without any risk or concerned.

For instance

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during the world pandemic, COVID-19, thousand of scientists have been trying to find out a vaccine or medicine that can protect the people from the

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viruses, so that means there are a variety of animal experiments have been done to

test

the new vaccines or medicines which is all in need at that moment.

Besides

, we can

test

animals which have similar genes with the human so that it helps scientists and

people broaden

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people, broaden

the horizon and learn more about the genes of the human and other species as well.