Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there are more and more animal experiments are being done for medical and other purposes. While some people think that it is morally wrong and should be banned, I think we can permit the animal testings thanks to its benefit and right purposes.
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the use and safety of that. By testing on animals, we can learn more about the genetics of some other species and our genetics too. There are
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, it is considered to be cruel and may cause suffering to animals. However
, the animal's genetics may be different from our humans so that may cause the wrong result. As some medicines can work well on animals but
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can cause illness and disease to animals.
In conclusion, I think that animal testings are necessary nowadays and can be used widely since it has brought to us a variety of benefits.
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