Whether or not someone achieves their aims is by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is though that luck is an essential element that will determine

one

’s success. I strongly oppose the view, and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs. On the

one

hand, people who are known for their well-achieved success, regardless of their field of expertise, have

one

thing in common: Hard-

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working

. They devoted years of significant work and even trying after each failure before making any groundbreaking achievements. Take Steve Jobs as an example, starting in his parent's garage and he is now known as the creator of the

first

-ever personal computer and many more game-changing achievements. He spent years studying coding and even working on every little detail, even

Caligraphy

beautiful handwriting

calligraphy

to make sure the Macintosh is both efficient and beautifully designed.

On the other hand

, being favoured by Lady Luck could be an advantage, but barely to influence

one

’s position, especially without any effort. Many athletes who are considered lucky to be born with talent actually are incredibly hard-working. NBA legend Michael

Jordan who

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Jordan, who

is undoubtedly blessed with his physical gift, spent his off season practising all day every day while everyone is enjoying themselves. It is not his

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blessing, but

blessing but

his diligence that made him the legend he is today. Not to mention, being lucky just happens as a coincident and once in a lifetime, no

one

is lucky to reach their goal every day without actually trying. In fact, people who get rich by winning the lottery often go back to previous financial state, if not worse.

This

is because they rely on that life-changing money to live and don’t feel motivated to work anymore. Once again, I strongly disagree that luck can make

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a

break

one

’s achievement.

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Only

by working diligently can

one

obtain and maintain their successful status.