Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

In today’s world of globalization and the unity of the many countries, it is advantage
for
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of
poorer nations to get some help from rich developed countries. Though, it is the main responsibility of a government to take care of their citizens. In
this
essay I will present both my views on wealthy countries and poorer nations. On the one hand, wealthy nations should take it as an opportunity to help the
under developed
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
underdeveloped
countries by providing them basic necessities to every human being like providing them free education and
food
.
Although
,
this
is not an easy
work but
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work, but
even if two or more countries will work out on
this
crucial matter,
that
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that's
how they can help
under developed
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
underdeveloped
on the poorer nations the they can set an example for other countries
also
.
For example
, the richest developed countries having a good number of NGO’s which can provide a social security to a poor
people
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person
. If these types of NGO’s will deal with poor
nations
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nations, then
then
these countries would at least get a basic
food
and education.
On the other hand
, it is the main responsibility of governments of poor countries to give some basic things to their citizens. Because without
this
, poorer nations would be able to make
growth
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a growth
. As we all know that no nation can grow without education and
food
. Education
play
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plays
a vital role
for
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in
every nation’s growth.
Likewise
,
food
also
plays its role.
For Instance
, if the country is not able to provide
food
and good health
then
it is obvious that people cannot be able to work
also
and definitely,
person
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people
the person
a person
would get involved in criminal activities. To conclude
this
topic, I would say that both
nations whether
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nations, whether
it is rich country or the government of
poor country
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poor countries
a poor country
, they both should take a responsibility mutually that how they can take care of people and how they can
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their basic needs.
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