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Some people think planning future is a waste of time and it is more important to focus on the present. Do you agree or disagree?

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Planning for the
future
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 is the most common term, almost everyone thinks about it, but some people get's away from the
idea
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 and celebrate their current
life
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. I could brief the merits and demerits of both the scenario, in which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 would go with the
idea
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 of preparing a slice of money to be saved.
First
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 and foremost, why the
idea
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 comes to get prepared for the
future
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? , human being and animals vary in their
life
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 cycle, animal's utmost target is to have meals for that day, that's it, but even some animals or insects have a habit of getting prepared for the winter,
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 ants & squirrels. As a human, we should be aware of all kinds of circumstances, that could affect or even have a huge shock of our routine
life
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,
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 as job lost, lose in business and even particularly after marriage and kids. It is highly advisable among the people, keep some bread for
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future
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the future
. I have a great example, Nina left her job and kept good bank balance while working, helped her to start her higher studies outside home country, which was her long term wish, without depending on the parents. On the flip side, people lose or sacrifice their most of the wishes to have savings, to build a better
life
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 or survival, which is unpredictable. As an example, God forbids, if some met an accident and died, he could not live a
life
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, he was wishing to have. What is the meaning of saving
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?, you sacrifice your current
life
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 to have a better
future
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, which is uncertain. It has to be balanced. As a conclusion, I would agree with the
idea
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 of saving and at the same time, it should not have a big impact on our current
life
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. A balanced lifestyle is the better choice. Thank you.
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